dreading guide (proofreaders wanted)

i just started skimming the new dreading guide thats been compiled and im already impressed on page 1

so i want to share the rough drafts with yaa get your editing notes and help perfect it

the final version wont be complete for a month so thers no hurry

the attached file once perfected will be made into a pdf and will be downloadable from the site

but will also be released to file shares totrrent sites anywhere u can download files free

check it out and help us perfect it

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updated by @soaring-eagle: 01/13/15 09:08:39PM

Proof reading is my thing SE. Grammar all day.

heres a revised version but i think alot of the language needs to be changed

and it needs a good bit of refining

and adding to it

so

lets take this and do a overhaul on it and give him a redone version to work off of when hes back

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Here you go SE. I didnt take out your notes. well I think this is the right one.

It deleted my edits, I have to redo it. Give me5 minutes.

jenni helloworld said:

It deleted my edits, I have to redo it. Give me5 minutes.

Okay, here is the correct one.

k i moved 1 misplaced period and added an additional note on adding a recovery section

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I think that the recovering section would be great.

i think its a must

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