Scalp problems :/
yea you have rather thin fine hair that's why the scalps so visible..thats fine theres definitely still hairs growing normally in the gaps
jojobas a good idea yea ..but you might want to look into your shampoo as a possible cause..i'm not familiar with it but if it contains sulphates like sls its likely the cause. they are skin irritants that are the primary ingredient in most shampoos including many that call themselves natural.
I know i had a lot of scalp issues till i switched to the dreadlockshampoo.com bars
switching to something that is truly natural and healthy (and made for dreads) might help a lot more then using jojoba
i'll also ad that with the weather changes (and lately the extremes in weather..thanks climate deniers) my scalps acted up a little between washes
Gosh thanks for clearing up my worries!
My shampoo contains ammonium lauryl sulphate, that might be the cause then. I'll have to grab myself some shampoos from the site you linked!